May Rain in the air,wind in my nose.
The two drops coalesced, springing a new hope.
Another chimera or a fresh lease of life??
The cadence in the air,is just a device.
But what is the remedy of missing alacrity,
broaching the subject seems distant possibility.
Covert desires,clandistinely withheld,
no catharsis possible, says the portent.
The things as they stand, look precipitous
but the sanguine within,still stays solicitous.
Tacit feelings gathering cement and the brick ,
will tenacious attempts of temerity do the trick ??
The two drops coalesced, springing a new hope.
Another chimera or a fresh lease of life??
The cadence in the air,is just a device.
But what is the remedy of missing alacrity,
broaching the subject seems distant possibility.
Covert desires,clandistinely withheld,
no catharsis possible, says the portent.
The things as they stand, look precipitous
but the sanguine within,still stays solicitous.
Tacit feelings gathering cement and the brick ,
will tenacious attempts of temerity do the trick ??
5 comments:
Kudos!!!!to your valiant effort.
Total feel of the poem has great tenacity intact with it.
"The cadence in the air, is just a device"...i simply like the sweet treachery in the sentence...gaddu, i seriously am always awed by the way u carry your freelings to paper with finesse, but your new efforts in a new medium is so so so praiseworthy..take another of your line" covert desires, clandestinely withheld"... the aliteration chimes in a bell that touches your dreams! gaddu i am highly proud of you and the way you yield your pen... pls keep writing, thats the only vision i have of you, a friend forever, who is such a writer!! i mean it!
Good one bro
expect some more good work from you and counting on it ....
yeah, that is awesome... really liked it... some lines are really enigmatic... brilliantly penned down, keep it up...
Great yaar.. the way you put down ur feelings as a poem r really good yaar!!!
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